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I have enjoyed the series so far the mechanics of the world are clear and easy to understand a lot of the excess jargon has been shaved out of it to allow a good merging of game mechanics with a form of eality My only criticism would be the excess amount of telling with very little showing in how the story is presented While this doesn T Break My Enjoyment Of The Books I Think A break my enjoyment of the books I think a show and less tell would add to the immersion and bring out the stories full potential Good story and have gone on to ead the next in the seriesHowever the kindle edition is plagued with formatting errors There are spelling and grammar mistakes on every page the font size and formatting is all over the place Most of this would have been sorted with a simple un through with a spell checker the est with a proof eader To elease it in this fashion is pretty poorA shame as the story itself is very engaging and I enjoyed it s great deal I think it much like it s predecessor is a ather good ead But like the title of this eview suggests it s iddled with Minor Grammatical Issues Throughout Misspelling grammatical issues throughout Misspelling characte. When Erik and Rugrat entered the ten ealms they didnt know what was going on They only knew entered the ten ealms they didnt know what was going on They only knew they had contracted the two week curseWhen entering the second ealm they came to understand their character sheets and part of the system that is called the ten ealms A place that the strong. ,


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T eally like the book but was interested enough in the story to finish Skipping great chunks3 Stars The book was okay finished it and will consider eading from the author4 Stars Really enjoyed the book will check out others by this author4 12 Stars Loved the book will immediately check out others by author if asked will ecommend book5 Stars LOVED the book Loved the book will immediately check out others by author if asked will ecommend book5 Stars LOVED the book immediately check out all others by author will pre emptively ecommend book to ALL my book friendsI loved it and expect I ll be ereading it again in the future This book is a solid 4 and a half stars which I ve book is a solid 4 and a half stars which I ve up to five as doesn t do half stars The only small problem I had with it is that when showing the levelling stats the publisher uses eual signs ather than dashes Normally this wouldn t be a problem but I listen to my books for hours while driving and as I use the kindle text to speech I find myself listening to about ten euals euals euals euals etc Then you get a sentence and another ten epeats of euals Have that happen ten times in two pages and it gets old FAST Without that I d give this book it s well deserved 5 stars. New future they needpower mana stones dungeon cores monster cores if not then the Dungeon will stop functioning and they will need to elocate once againAs they ascend to the second ealm Erik and Rugrat need to grow their skills gain information and find a dungeon Its hardly ever that ea. R names is also another fault but my biggest thing that affected
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reading was poor grammer that affected the flow of eading Scenes just seemed to appear creatures and details that had no descriptions or if they did they were generic and epeated I think that the basis of the story is eally interesting and well thought out But I think that an editor or third party should eally ummage through this and turn it from a pretty good ead into an amazing one Loved the characters story and the world that is being built Looking forward to the next book in THE SERIES AWESOME FOLLOWUP WANT HAS GOOD BASECITY BUILDING series Awesome followup want Has good basecity building the world s society is very interesting Strength ules all I m totally loving this series Both MCs work learn and fight their way upward with true grit and determination The whole world has such detail and depth that it s fascinating all on it s own which makes the story even better Any avid eader of LITRPG will find this series is a top pick for their eading list I can t wait to see what happens next 4 12 StarsMy personal ating system1 Star Couldn t finish the book2 Stars Didn. Make the ules and the weak cling to them for protection and hope that they might be left in peaceThey passed through the trials of the Beast Mountain Dungeon taking control of it and becoming the leader of nearly two hundred peopleNow in command of the Alva Dungeon and looking to forge and becoming the leader of nearly two hundred peopleNow in command of the Alva Dungeon and looking to forge The Second Realm: A LitRPG Fantasy Series (The Ten Realms Book 2)

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